ARGUMENT

<Children's Smartphone Use>

There are many people who use smartphones. They said it's really comfortable and interesting. That's why the youth also use them and are get addicted to it. At first, smartphone was a machine for adults. However, now, it spreads to all ages. Most people wanted to use it, and changed! We can see people everywhere using their own smartphones. This fact affects children. They want to change their phones. And their parents changed it to the new machine. It has become a problem of these days. "Children" means the students who are younger than middle school students. They can't control themselves and can be selfish. Children should not be allowed to use smartphones.

The first reason is addiction. If young children get addicted to smartphones, it can be a dangerous problem. Middle school or High school students get addicted, too. They can control themselves better than young children. However, they can't do that very well. Older guys can get addicted, though. How about our children? If their parents have a smartphone, it can be intimidating to them. They can touch and play with it. Smartphones have really great power to tempt its user. Also, young children can't get themselves from its power. If someone gets addicted, he/she thinks their smartphone is part of their body.

The next point is the expensive taxes. You know that smartphones have many functions. They are connected to the internet, have Kakao talk and many other applications. If you want to use or download them, you have to pay for that. That's why the smartphone's taxes are more expensive than other phones. It means if you do not use the phone for official service, it's not an essential thing to you. It's true that students don't have to get this kind of phones for their studying. They can use their computers and books. I know that smartphones are more comfortable than a computer. However, it's not good to depend on your smartphones. You don't need to submit that much taxes for the unnecessary functions of them.

Also, there are some people who think smartphone is good for them. There are many reasons which are valid. So I'm going to refute about their opinion. These are the main things they nominated to support themselves.

Then, I'm going to talk about their trendy things. All of us know that smartphone's designs are getting better and better. Also, it gets more useful functions. It makes them trendy. It makes them essential and desired. However, trends are temporary thing. It changes everyday. If famous drama's actress holds a new phone in the scene, it becomes a new trend. We don't need to follow the trends of the entertainment world. We need to find and develop our individuality. Most of the youths want to know and follow the trend. However, it's kind of silly. If you follow their things, you can't be yourself. You need to know who you are. Following the trend is not your obligation. It's just an option of you.

The last thing I want to tell you is their facility. Most of us like to use more convenient things. Also, a smartphone is the most comfortable thing to use. However, these comfortable functions can make you lazy. You are so dependent on your "smart" phones. Yes, they are smarter than us. However, people made it. It can't be better than us. It's just a machine to help our work and detailed things that we can't do well. But these days, people want smartphones to do their all work. It's an evil influence of the convenience of smartphones. I also like their good faces of convenience. However, it also makes us idle.

This is my argument about smartphone use of the children. They can get addicted, need expensive taxes, trend is not essential thing to them, and it makes us lazy. There are many other problems about this. However, we can't quit it because of their convenient functions. Then we need to search another way to prevent these troubles. All of us know that there are many problems without this, now. So it's a kind of unavoidable thing. However, it's time to think about our children seriously. Is it okay to buy them smartphones? Not, it's not. If you want to buy it for them, that season should be the latest as you can.