When I wake up, I can feel some fresh things: It's little dry and uncomfortable to wake up early. However, there are several things that we can feel only in the morning time.
It's hard to wake up, but if we wake up early, there are new things like birds' chirping, bright sunshine, and dry but fresh air. If we open the door at an early time, we can see and fell something special inside. I can't express it well, but it's so impressive to me. Cold and dry, but warm and also fresh. It's a kind of new world.
Vignette - <Now>
It's 9:30 a.m. to start to write this story. There are many classmates around me. Some of us are really sleepy because of the warmness in this room. This morning is not that cold, but snowy outside. It's not good for walking.
Until NOW, the snow has not melted, and it's cold like early winter. However, we can't feel that kind of coldness because of our adaptation. There are many people against the cold weather of winter. It becomes warmer than before. I like this proper temperature. I believe that it'll become warmer and warmer.
Wow! You are English writing skills are awesome. You would be best poem writer!
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading both of your works. You seem to be very aware of your surroundings, and that's a good thing when you're attempting to write literature. Good work.
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